Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 78: Deus ex Shirt-Mender |
kenisu - #78
Well, *that* was a cheap plot device! ...Oh wait. I wrote it. |
4/16/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 79: A Flustered Mom |
kenisu - #79
I have to wonder what people thought of that "I knew somebody was in trouble" panel back in its Halloween days... since, of course, back then, I hadn't yet submitted the pages containing the subplot at the end of Chapter 1, where Ninten feels a sense of danger to someone not far off. |
4/21/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 80: Despair Creeps In |
kenisu - #80
Wow... this Lauren character is pretty tactless, isn't she? Come to think of it, I guess in a roundabout way, it's almost a reflection of a certain other tactless "good news/bad news" scene from the MOTHER series. |
4/29/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 81: Fade to Black |
kenisu - #81
Camel's back = BROKEN. Looking over my original of this page from two/three years ago, I noticed something I had forgotten about. A faint erasure can be seen in the sky, in the panel where Marilyn is on the ground (you probably can't see it here, since this is photocopy, and a colored one at that). It's a speech balloon of Marilyn going "AcK... gAHhh..." and it's accompanied by the sound effect "twitch twitch". All I can say is: *wow*, I'm really glad I recognized the mood killer there when I did. |
5/5/10 | 0.00 |
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 82: Emergency |
kenisu - #82
There's something about that river, and the trees beyond it, that make me wish I could live there. |
5/17/10 | 0.00 |
