Prologue - Page 6: The Night Deepens

kenisu - #06
Whatever it was that was above the couple's house, it has now departed.
For the time being.

kenisu - #06
Whatever it was that was above the couple's house, it has now departed.
For the time being.

| Author    | Title    | Description    | Date    | Rank    | 
|---|---|---|---|---|
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 78: Deus ex Shirt-Mender | kenisu - #78 Well, *that* was a cheap plot device! ...Oh wait. I wrote it. | 4/16/10 | 0.00 | 
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 79: A Flustered Mom | kenisu - #79 I have to wonder what people thought of that "I knew somebody was in trouble" panel back in its Halloween days... since, of course, back then, I hadn't yet submitted the pages containing the subplot at the end of Chapter 1, where Ninten feels a sense of danger to someone not far off. | 4/21/10 | 0.00 | 
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 80: Despair Creeps In | kenisu - #80 Wow... this Lauren character is pretty tactless, isn't she? Come to think of it, I guess in a roundabout way, it's almost a reflection of a certain other tactless "good news/bad news" scene from the MOTHER series. | 4/29/10 | 0.00 | 
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 81: Fade to Black | kenisu - #81 Camel's back = BROKEN. Looking over my original of this page from two/three years ago, I noticed something I had forgotten about. A faint erasure can be seen in the sky, in the panel where Marilyn is on the ground (you probably can't see it here, since this is photocopy, and a colored one at that). It's a speech balloon of Marilyn going "AcK... gAHhh..." and it's accompanied by the sound effect "twitch twitch". All I can say is: *wow*, I'm really glad I recognized the mood killer there when I did. | 5/5/10 | 0.00 | 
| kenisu3000 | Chapter 2 - Page 82: Emergency | kenisu - #82 There's something about that river, and the trees beyond it, that make me wish I could live there. | 5/17/10 | 0.00 |